Wednesday, December 16, 2009

< 55 FICTION- STICKY >

She took it in her mouth. It tasted so good.
She played on it with her tongue and lips.
..
..
She started blowing it.
..
..
Soon, it popped; it was all over her face. It was all sticky.

“I told you, not to blow bubble with that chewing gum ” Said her friend.
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31 comments:

Chanz said...

Another good one coming from you..

Sorcerer said...

@chanz
spasibo..spasibo

Ramit said...

Dude, you oughta be censored! :)

Sorcerer said...

@ramit
Err..Its chewing gum.like big babool

I plead not guilty

Vamsi said...

good one !

Yemiledu said...

True you got to be censored.
24 more posttsssss!

Sorcerer said...

@vamsi
thank you

@yemiledu

Its just chewing gum..
ayyoooo!!!
naaa

5 more posts..
Iam counting last year+this year=100

Shweta Shetty said...

Hey nice blog! Thanks for stopping by mine. Do follow if you like it.
I'll blogroll you :)
http://shweta-kaleidoscope.blogspot.com/

Yemiledu said...

Ahaaa! :~P

5 more posts ??
I was like happy I will be getting a post to read everyday here...all the month of dec :(

Make it 24 more posts :)( request..naa demand :P)

Karthik said...

I like it when girls chew and blow chewing gum.. :D
Keep 'em coming, comrade. :)

The Idiot Blogs said...

If this one wasn't 55 fiction... you could have played around with it so much more.. this one climaxed too soon :-)

That apart... you are a talented writer mate... I read Sorcy's Fables and enjoyed that too... I look forward to reading more.. following you.. Cheers

Megha said...

haha...good one..
what do you think of censorship ?

Nipun said...

Ahan!!
Getting kinki dude!!
Start using content warning!!
Cool.

Nuts

sm said...

good one

RoHiT said...

hahaha... good one :D... I expected it'd be something chewy chewy!!
keep writing!!:)

--
RoHiT...
http://dial-a-denial.blogspot.com/

Dutch donut girl said...

;-)

Antarman said...

:):) good one, anything which brings a smile is good, and it brought one to me

sulagna said...

sorci subah subah i had my daily dose...i shall come again :D

Sorcerer said...

@shwetha
thank you for the comment :)

@yemiledu
yeah I will try and post one post a day.
one post a day keep me the doctor away.

@karthik
hmmm...nice..nice...

@idiotblogs
hmm.with chewing gum,the sugar wont last too long..hope you got my drift

@megha
censorship?
Noo..its chewing gum..
i am soo innocent.

@nipun
no..content warming.
its chewing gum.

@sm
thank you for ze comment

@rohit
genius...seee..you got such an innocent mind.

@dutchdonutgirl
;-)
muaahahahahaha

@antarman
:) thank you for the comment

@sulagna
please do come back everyday. for daily dose of insanity

:)
cheers!!

Destiny's child... said...

Gotcha! ;)
Nice one :D

DiDo said...

lolzzz Socz.. too good.. i cudnt stop laughing...

Sorcerer said...

@destiny's child
thank you for the comment

@dido
:)
keep laughin :)

ode writer said...

good and wicked one! :)

Bedazzled said...

after following u r blog for a while ,i saw that coming ..finally !! ;-)

Sorcerer said...

@ode writer
spasibo

@beddazzled

its de words..

Saadi said...

Wow..u've gotten really good at this!! Hahaha...i love the twists at the end!!

Pratik Gupta said...

dude you are going towards the best 55 words fiction writer world will ever know .....all the best!!

Sorcerer said...

@saadi
yeah..i love happy endings.. and boom kabooms

@pratik
thank you..thank you
there should be a nobel for blogwriting..
dont you think...
errr

Pratik Gupta said...

obb dude....lets start noblog awards or something like tht

Meenakshi said...

buhahaha..
I guessed it was the chewing gum from the very beginning..

Anonymous said...

I read about it some days ago in another blog and the main things that you mention here are very similar