Tuesday, December 8, 2009

< 55 FICTION - HER BF>


He was her new boy friend.

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He was huge for her, as she felt him between her legs. She felt the elation as he quickened.

She felt it pulsating, she squeezed him hard. Her thighs closed on him.

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She was almost… there…
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She pulled into the parking bay.

She thought with a smile…Pulsar… Definitely Male”.

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Now those who don't know what PULSAR is. It's an awesome bike and the caption goes "Definitely Male".

This 55 Fiction thingy is kinda growing on me.

[ Input evil laugh here]
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EDIT(After Saurabh's comment at December 8, 2009 5:31 PM):

Saurabh said..

"You really nailed this one. I own one Definitely Male Bajaj Pulsar too. But next time I "ride" it.... therez gonna be an awkward smile on my face!"

Well.. I say

"OOPS!!Ah, me public!"

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21 comments:

Thornhill Wealth Forum said...
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санжог said...

sorcy its really good, u are getting better at fiction 55. keep it up bro. Great post

Sorcerer said...

@sanju
thank you buddy

I hope SANTA finds me good still

Saurabh Panshikar said...

SANTA will blush upon reading this!

You really nailed this one. I own one Definitely Male Bajaj Pulsar too. But next time I "ride" it.... therez gonna be an awkward smile on my face!


CAPCHA sa "hondah"
Du'uh its BAJAJ

Pratik Gupta said...

you should use this idea in a creative idea or something..who knows... you may be the next prahalad kakkar or first sorcerer
First time here...grt read!!

Sorcerer said...

@pratik
Thank you for the comment
hey!! read your blog too
.awesome..

creative idea.. well my friends use some other phrases for my 'creative ideas'..Wait till I show them this comment..

cout<< "HELLO WORLD!! I GOT A POINT TO MAKE"<< endl;

Sorcerer said...

@saurabh

hahahahah!! you are riding a male?

*points and laughs

If BAJAJ CHanges the caption after reading this..Well..I made a dent in the world..

oohh la laaa..

Pratik Gupta said...

Hey thanks mate!! and go ahead...tell your friends what you are worth....anyways you also the victim of your friends for the ahead-of-the-time-brains you possess

Nipun said...

gr8 work sorcerer.
First time here and will surely be visiting next time.
Nicely put up version of Pulsar.
Even I need a Pulsar now and want to ride the ride that you have explained.
Kudos pal.
Nuts..

Smita said...

:D

Karthik said...

Dude you are seriously getting good at this 55-fiction thing. Keep 'em coming.

anjugandhi said...

thanx for your visit to my blog

Rakesh said...

hey hey

tht was WICKED! haha

susie said...

sorcy..!!! *slaps her head and walks away laughing..

sulagna said...

damn!!! i need to catch up on the other fictions

awesome dude..awesome...

its very "rear" that brilliant work "comes"

Sorcerer said...

@nipun
thank you..comrade :)

@smita
thanks for the :D

@karthik
You ppl are the guiding force..

@anju
thanks for the comment.

@rakesh
haha..yeah it was

@susie
hey choosie... ya know.. err...hmm.

@sulagna
yeah.. thank you for reading my blog

Bindu said...

Dear Lawwwrdd :D

B

Megha said...

should I say you are getting better, or darker ?

:)

Sorcerer said...

@Bindu
:)
thank for the comment

@megha
Ha ha...
Darker like coffee!!
more kicks

SindhuBhairavi said...

:) hmmm!

theschmuck said...

wicked!:)