Friday, December 4, 2009

< 55 FICTION - FIRST TIME >

If it has to happen, it has to happen now. He had never done this before.
He really didn’t wan to rush, break the skin, bleed. He felt the soft skin.
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He took the stick in his hands. His hands trembling.
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He placed the razor near his foamed up beard and shaved his scraggly beard.
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That would be my attempt in writing a 55 fiction. Just stating, if in case, you missed the 'awesomeness'

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15 comments:

Sammok said...

Lol. nice, end-wise.

btw, those fullstops add to the 55?

Sorcerer said...

@sam.
nope..thats..just the Bonus!!

*slaps on forehead...
Engg..always and Engg.

Me-Me King said...

Granted, I'm not yet through my first cup of coffee quite yet, but I'm afraid I don't understand the concept of 55 Fiction. I'll do a little research before I return so I can comment appropriately.

Ciao!

Angels Never Lie said...

nice ;)

Pesto Sauce said...

I shiver to shave everyday

Karthik said...

That was a bloody naughty story told in 55 words. :D
Good one. Keep writing.

Saadi said...

Lol...seriously 'awesomeness'! :D

Yemiledu said...

hmm.....not bad :P
good one....

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Nice try man

But I believe you could do better!

It'd have been better if the climax was the last sentence only.

Megha said...

Nice one to start :)

Sorcerer said...

@memeking
55 fiction is awesomeness in 55 words.

@angles,pesto sauce
thank you for the comment

@karthik
khi khi khi khi khi
thanks ;)

@saadi
:) thanks for the comment

@yemiledu
:) will write more

@sau
you ppl are my inspiration.
Read your 55 fiction and thought Why not try one.


@megha
yeah..a small step for sorcy..a giant leap in literature

gee..joking..

санжог said...

two words NICE BRO.
good begining

Bedazzled said...

lol..

Sorcerer said...

@sanjog
thank you..
you always..say I am a man of few words..I just want prove it to the world.

@beddazzled
thanks for the comment1

The Panorama said...

He he he... this was tricky!! I almost thought I had come to one of "those" blogs. Very funny, actually!
Thanks for visiting my blog and keep visiting: Your blog is interesting and I will definitely be back to read more:)