Ryan looked through the Scope of his M40A3 sniper rifle. He had a clear shot of the head that brought violence to his motherland.
Holding his breathe, he pressed the trigger.
..
..
“CRACK”
Ryan felt his warm blood flow down his chest.
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“Bogey down”- A shadow spoke.
“I am sorry”-Ryan thought as he fell.
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Conscious: So a clean post after, lots of perverted ones.
Me: Well!! We are not perverts..
Conscious: Speak for yourself. I know I am not a pervert.
Me: So, Who gives me these ideas?
Conscious: I get held against my wishes.
Me:So, now its all MY fault. Well!! Fine.. shut up Now..alright..I made it up to you. Let me sleep in peace..or watch football or do what ever I like.
Conscious: Ooh!! This hostage game is sooo nice nice...
Me: Shut up and lets post this another awesomeness.
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Sunday, December 6, 2009
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wondering how Ryan was still alive! Maybe it's a part of the perverted post! :P
Good one again! keep writing.. Wishing u gud luck.. :)
Cheers,
Gopsay+1
Read all the 55 fiction posts and I have only one thing to say - U DUMB F****** CONSCIOUS,GET THE HELL OUT OF SORCERER'S HEAD! We want some laughs here!!
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good 55-ers :-)
hehe I dont know why I find this psychoism funny :P
Well written! :)
@gopsay.
I dont like people getting killed..So...
@quirkfit
I packed the conscious out for a long vacation.
@neeraj
interview?
*faints
@ashwathy
thanks for the comment
@Aditya
psychosism is funny..
:)
looking forward for some more awsomeness ;)
@megha
Thanks for ze comment.
hmm..I have something more wickid in ze mind
A wonderful 55-fiction :)
Am glad to see your conscious is still alive and it speaks occasionally.
Keep up the good work.
Cheers!!
@chatterbox
Iam training it to speak in female voice..
but everytime..it tries to speak..that goes into something like an automated system..
good one, but, you dont 'push' a lipstick!!!!! you just turn the bottom. gotcha there :D
@shreya..
err..she had one of those 'Manual Lipsticks'.
This was the best of the 55 ficctions so far. :)
What can I say your conversations are just too unique I am lost for words!!!
sorcy, u need to go out and get some fresh air.. :| ur conscious seems to b confused..
Interesting :)
loved the convo more than the fiction..
the fiction went above my head (the perverted ones never did)..Lesser mortal u see.. :)
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